Feedback and Revision



After consideration of the conventions of a magazine article, I decided to revise mine. The first draft of my article is in the form of one large paragraph. I decided I wanted my article to be displayed in columns to keep the attention of the audience as they read. When I made this change, I kept the same article content as I had previously and created text boxes that where more compact and in columns. I also added a page to my article to make it two pages. I included two new pictures on the additional page as well. 

 



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